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authorMatthew Marchese <maffblaster@gentoo.org>2017-07-27 17:38:32 -0700
committerMatthew Marchese <maffblaster@gentoo.org>2017-07-27 20:54:15 -0700
commit05417061458ac410241250c20d615145dd9441f4 (patch)
tree8a48b9cdd8b52eef879da3375561151910f3adca /get-started
parentMake scripts have consistent output. (diff)
Sentence case migration.
Signed-off-by: Matthew Marchese <maffblaster@gentoo.org>
Diffstat (limited to 'get-started')
5 files changed, 25 insertions, 25 deletions
diff --git a/get-started/about/index.html b/get-started/about/index.html
index 86d5fa8..483e591 100644
--- a/get-started/about/index.html
+++ b/get-started/about/index.html
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ title: 'About Gentoo'
{% include hero-section/start class="abouthdr huge" %}
<div class="row">
<div class="col-md-4">
- <img src="/assets/img/bg/larry.png" class="img-responsive" alt="Larry the cow, a bit unhappy">
+ <img src="/assets/img/bg/larry.png" class="img-responsive" alt="Larry the cow, a bit unhappy.">
<div class="col-md-8">
Larry the Cow was a bit frustrated<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;at the current state of Linux distributions…
@@ -74,4 +74,4 @@ title: 'About Gentoo'
Typing one command (<kbd>emerge -uD world</kbd>) will ensure that all the packages that <em>you</em> want on your system are updated automatically.
-</p> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/get-started/index.html b/get-started/index.html
index aa414ca..4dd4093 100644
--- a/get-started/index.html
+++ b/get-started/index.html
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ nav1: get-started
nav1-show: true
nav1-weight: 5
-title: 'Getting Started with Gentoo Linux'
-navtitle: 'Get Started'
+title: 'Getting started with Gentoo'
+navtitle: 'Get started'
<p class="lead">
@@ -17,10 +17,10 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
<div class="row">
<div class="col-md-2 get-started-icon"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-power-off fa-5x"></span></div>
<div class="col-md-10">
- <h2 class="stick-top">Step 1: Boot a Live Environment</h2>
- <p>We offer a variety of Live Environments that allow you to perform the installation.</p>
+ <h2 class="stick-top">Step 1: Boot a live environment</h2>
+ <p>We offer a variety of live environments that allow you to perform the installation.</p>
- <p>Choose between a lean console-only environment, a fully featured LiveDVD, or try the Gentoo-based SystemRescueCD which offers a mixture of both.</p>
+ <p>Choose between a lean console-only environment or a fully featured LiveDVD. Alternatively users are encouraged to try the Gentoo-based SystemRescueCD.</p>
{% include hero-section/end %}
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
<div class="row">
<div class="col-md-2 get-started-icon"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-book fa-5x"></span></div>
<div class="col-md-10">
- <h2 class="stick-top">Step 2: Follow the Installation Instructions</h2>
- <p>Gentoo provides you with detailed documentation that guides you through the installation process.</p>
+ <h2 class="stick-top">Step 2: Follow the installation instructions</h2>
+ <p>The Gentoo Handbook provides detailed documentation that guides you through the installation process.</p>
<p>There is no installation program&mdash;you're the installer. That way, you can apply all the customizations you desire.</p>
@@ -68,18 +68,18 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
<h3><i class="fa fa-fw fa-cogs"></i> Contribute</h3>
There's always things to engineer, build, fix, and document.
- You're invited to help shape Gentoo.
+ Consider this your formal invitation to help shape Gentoo!
<div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
<h3><i class="fa fa-fw fa-heart"></i> Donate</h3>
Your support is vital to keep us running.
- Even little amounts help keep servers running.
+ Even little amounts help keep our servers online.
<div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
- <h3><i class="fa fa-fw fa-bullhorn"></i> Spread the Word</h3>
+ <h3><i class="fa fa-fw fa-bullhorn"></i> Spread the word</h3>
Happy with the system you built? Tell the world about it.
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
<div class="row">
<div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
- <a href="/get-involved/" class="btn btn-primary btn-block">Get Involved</a>
+ <a href="/get-involved/" class="btn btn-primary btn-block">Get involved</a>
<div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
<a href="/get-involved/contribute/" type="button" class="btn btn-primary btn-block">What can I do?</a>
@@ -97,4 +97,4 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
<div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
-</div> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/get-started/philosophy/index.md b/get-started/philosophy/index.md
index ee3d0f1..6c8d5dc 100644
--- a/get-started/philosophy/index.md
+++ b/get-started/philosophy/index.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ nav3-show: true
nav3-weight: 1
layout: page-nav3
-title: 'The Philosophy of Gentoo'
+title: 'The philosophy of Gentoo'
navtitle: 'Philosophy'
Every user has work they need to do. The goal of Gentoo is to design tools and systems that allow a user to do that work as pleasantly and efficiently as possible, as they see fit. Our tools should be a joy to use, and should help the user to appreciate the richness of the Linux and free software community, and the flexibility of free software. This is only possible when the tool is designed to reflect and transmit the will of the user, and leave the possibilities open as to the final form of the raw materials (the source code.) If the tool forces the user to do things a particular way, then the tool is working against, rather than for, the user. We have all experienced situations where tools seem to be imposing their respective wills on us. This is backwards, and contrary to the Gentoo philosophy.
@@ -17,4 +17,4 @@ Put another way, the Gentoo philosophy is to create better tools. When a tool is
The goal of Gentoo is to strive to create near-ideal tools. Tools that can accommodate the needs of many different users all with divergent goals. Don't you love it when you find a tool that does exactly what you want to do? Doesn't it feel great? Our mission is to give that sensation to as many people as possible.
Daniel Robbins \\
-Previous Chief Architect \ No newline at end of file
+Previous Chief Architect
diff --git a/get-started/philosophy/social-contract.md b/get-started/philosophy/social-contract.md
index 51796bd..c39ee7c 100644
--- a/get-started/philosophy/social-contract.md
+++ b/get-started/philosophy/social-contract.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ nav3-weight: 10
layout: page-nav3
title: 'Gentoo Social Contract'
-navtitle: 'Social Contract'
+navtitle: 'Social contract'
This social contract is intended to clearly describe the overall development policies and standards of the Gentoo project development team. Parts of this document have been derived from the [Debian Social Contract](https://www.debian.org/social_contract). It is generally very similar to it except that certain parts have been clarified and augmented while other parts deemed redundant have been removed. Comments are welcome. Please send them to our [gentoo-dev@lists.gentoo.org](mailto:gentoo-dev@lists.gentoo.org) mailing list.
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ If a product associated with an official Gentoo project does not satisfy these r
An official list of Gentoo projects is listed under the Gentoo Metastructure.
A Gentoo project does not need to produce a Gentoo operating system in order to be officially recognized.
-## Gentoo is and will remain Free Software
+## Gentoo is and will remain free software
We will release our contributions to Gentoo as free software, metadata or documentation,
under the GNU General Public License version 2 (or later, at our discretion) or the Creative Commons - Attribution / Share Alike version 2 (or later, at our discretion).
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Note: We are considering extending the above clause to require that all core Gen
to a license approved by the OSI and Free Software Foundation (<a href="https://www.gnu.org/">FSF</a>).
-## We will give back to the Free Software Community
+## We will give back to the free software community
We will establish relationships with Free Software authors and collaborate with them when possible. We will submit bug-fixes, improvements, user requests, etc. to the "upstream" authors of software included in our system. We will also clearly document our contributions to Gentoo as well as any improvements or changes we make to external sources used by Gentoo (whether in the form of patches, "sed tweaks" or some other form). We acknowledge that our improvements and changes are much more meaningful to the larger Free Software community if they are clearly documented and explained, since not everyone has the time or ability to understand the literal changes contained in the patches or tweaks themselves.
diff --git a/get-started/screenshots/index.html b/get-started/screenshots/index.html
index 91e9dff..e294b00 100644
--- a/get-started/screenshots/index.html
+++ b/get-started/screenshots/index.html
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-title: Gentoo Screenshots
+title: Gentoo screenshots
navtitle: Screenshots
nav1: get-started
@@ -7,10 +7,10 @@ nav2: screenshots
nav2-show: true
nav2-weight: 30
-<p class="lead">
- As Gentoo doesn't come with a default GUI, we can't show you a generic Gentoo screenshot.
- <br>
- What you can find here instead are examples of awesome setups ran by our users.
+<p class="lead stick-bottom">
+Gentoo does not come with a default GUI so there is no such thing as a generic Gentoo screenshot.
+<br />
+Rendered below are examples of great looking graphical configurations. Each one was created by our wonderful community.
<div class="row">
@@ -68,4 +68,4 @@ nav2-weight: 30
Looking for more? The Gentoo community on Google+ has a dedicated <a href="https://plus.google.com/communities/100146718762350759856/stream/09938b7e-4913-4bc5-bdd6-9635c4a1bf60">Screenshots</a> section.
-</p> \ No newline at end of file